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Old 03-19-2010, 05:12 PM
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Thanks, Dusty! I really like it!

And it was in blue!

(And it's OK if you haven't had time to read my stories, they're pretty long.)
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Old 03-19-2010, 05:14 PM
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Thanks, Dusty! I really like it!

And it was in blue!

(And it's OK if you haven't had time to read my stories, they're pretty long.)
yeah,I used blue to match your siggie. I just feel real bad because Everyone writes on here and I never read any of their stuff! Yet i feel like they should read mine! Uggghhh I'm so evil! *slaps self* owww!
Well,I'm off to read yours now..and some more sophi renee'.
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Old 03-19-2010, 05:35 PM
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Reagan, if I had to choose one word to describe this latest poem of yours, the word would be:

FUN!!
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Old 03-19-2010, 05:58 PM
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Aww thanks copper. though Apology might better suit it.
Here's one I've written about how Narnia beats Twilight.

NARNIA VS TWILIGHT

Narnia,The magical land of Aslan's light
is now resting in the shadow
Of a silly franchise called Twilight.
At the hastings store,if you care to see
Narnia lies on the shelves,covered in cobwebs and disarray
while Twilight gets all the scruntiny
and all the crazy Fangirl's money(say it like Mon-AY)
I went to that store but a week ago
To look at the books and maybe get a video
when I saw in the teen area
all that Twilight trash
I went to find my Narnia
and then beat Twilight to hash!
I went to bed that night after watching The Wild
and was with the heroes of Narnia,acting like a such a child!
I was with My handsome Caspian and the Gorgeous Susan
Edward was nowhere in sight
Edmund and Peter were having a sword fight
and Peter was losin'.
I threw my hat in the ring and beat them both
but of course you gotta wake up sometime
Twilight's gonna be the "thing" and edward's an Oaf
I'll still be with Narnia though,listening to Regina's sweet chime.
(regina spektor's song from PC)
I'll be dancing with the Kings and Queens of old
and maybe get my own throne
Caspian and Peter will try to impress me with deeds daring and bold
and try to tickle my funny bone!
I'll laugh and laugh and hang out with the queens
while Edward and Bella get all the other girl's screams
I'm perfectly happy in cair paravel thank you
so if you say I'm a Twilight fangirl,
when you open your mouth I'll thrust in my shoe!
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Old 03-19-2010, 06:17 PM
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Copperfox is right...these are fun!
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They are to write!
Heres another one inspired by a stupid question/stupid answer i got that was "why are the boys where I live idiots" "because you're not in Narnia"


Boys
I'm a Twelve year old girl who looks fifteen
And boys now think I'm hot
but that's not keen
Most may think I'm lucky but I'd rather be a fruit
I don't like being eyeballed at the pool,even when I wear a full piece suit!
I'd like to trade places with Cherrysoda
She's 10 and but looks so little
so when she goes out to a show or even minnesota
everyone just crowds around and says "Oh how adorable!"
But there's one place I know where these idiots will leave me alone
and I'll actually have Love
It's called Narnia and I want it to be home
where I'll fly like a dove
My sweetheart will be waiting
One of noble heart
one who won't be dating
any other tart
He's a prince,and caspian is his name
now all you goofy hooligans
go find some other dame!

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Reagan, you are SO right to prefer NOT to rush into the scene with boys at age, OMG, twelve!!! That scene, at that age, you need like a bullet in the head. It's a shame in a way, though--because some gentle form of flirtation between even young boys and girls could be harmless, IF society had not been working so hard (for longer than you've been alive) to force on kids the idea that they can be adults already. As it is--yes, hide out with us till you're older!

With respect to the poem before that, you certainly chose the right side. If Twilight vampires could somehow turn up in the Narnian world, Aslan would NOT permit His children to be helpless victims of monsters who had such unfair advantages. He would appear in person, intercept ALL the sexy vampires wherever they were, slay ALL the evil ones without mercy, and if any were like Esme and Carlisle, He would change them into normal people.
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Reagan, you are SO right to prefer NOT to rush into the scene with boys at age, OMG, twelve!!! That scene, at that age, you need like a bullet in the head. It's a shame in a way, though--because some gentle form of flirtation between even young boys and girls could be harmless, IF society had not been working so hard (for longer than you've been alive) to force on kids the idea that they can be adults already. As it is--yes, hide out with us till you're older!

With respect to the poem before that, you certainly chose the right side. If Twilight vampires could somehow turn up in the Narnian world, Aslan would NOT permit His children to be helpless victims of monsters who had such unfair advantages. He would appear in person, intercept ALL the sexy vampires wherever they were, slay ALL the evil ones without mercy, and if any were like Esme and Carlisle, He would change them into normal people.
Yeah I wrote that "boys" poem discussing how I hate that scene. I mean the problem at public schools is horrifying. It's actually the reason I'm homeschooled.And yes I WILL hide out with you till I'm older! Gah I've had so many run ins with idiots in public. I look fifteen now and that's the problem(thank God I can't wear mini skirts!) If I EVER want love,I come to my imaginary world and pretend to be Tigerlily. That's usually when I'm in a bad mood and want a hug...
And the Twilight and Narnia poem is about how Book stores put up all this evil gross stuff in the teen section with Twilight involved and expect ME to take it! They hide the narnia stuff back with all the baby books and it's not fair! I went into the store the other day and my mom bought Twiligth candy cuz we were making fun of it and since I look like a teenager the clerk was like "You guys want this out of the bag?" and my mom said "Oh I think we can wait till we get home" and the clerk said "Oh I think they might think differently." My mind went blank and i said real loudly "NO!"
My mom was joking with me in the car saying in a nerdy voice "No,I like Narnia."
I'm proud to like it though,I wear long pants under short skirts,want nothing to to with boys,and even if I like someone It's usually the poor shy guy everyone picks on. And NARNIA IS MY THING! I'm so happy to be on a forum where we share the same ideals
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Old 03-19-2010, 10:52 PM
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Then make sure to give that poor shy boy a fair chance, five or six years from now. Because about forty-two years ago, I was more or less like him.
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I liked the one for Seastar, that's really how I feel too. There's so much good stuff here to read, I can't keep up with it all. (I hardly keep up with any . . . )

I totally like the one about Twilight and Narnia! Go Narnia!!
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