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Old 03-16-2010, 08:30 AM
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I love the one about Mewsie. Good work on all three, Dusty. You're sure doing better than I ever did when I was 12.
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Old 03-16-2010, 09:54 AM
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I agree, the poems are great! I've never written any poems since I was like ten...

I remember the first poem my little sister wrote. She was...five, I think?

"A hungry shark
Ate a boy named Mark.
His mother said, 'Oh, brother.'
His brother Joe
(Who was a foe)
Laughed 'Ho, ho, ho, ho.'"

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Old 03-16-2010, 12:15 PM
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I'll write one here and now for the thread.

Of burnished gold the newborn sun is made
The crimson dawn announces its debut
And sparkling stars across the blue displayed
Must vanish with the silver morning dew

Badgers write like that, but only after their first cup of coffee.
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Old 03-16-2010, 01:18 PM
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Awwwww thx guys. I'm trying to think up something for you guys too!
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Old 03-17-2010, 04:26 PM
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Oh this is an old poem I wrote for school absent mindedly. I used inkspot and sopespian's names.

INKSPOT,INKSPOT PLEASE COME QUICK
LORD SOPESPIAN HAS GOTTEN SICK
HE SWALLOWED A HORSE SHOE
I SAW IT TOO
SO INKSPOT,INKSPOT PLEASE COME QUICK!
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There once was a man named Phadryis
With an H where the usual I is
This limerick's insane
Cause my work weary brain
Can not hazard to guess who the guy is

Makes no sense but has a nice cadence, hmm?
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Old 03-17-2010, 05:03 PM
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There once was a man named Phadryis
With an H where the usual I is
This limerick's insane
Cause my work weary brain
Can not hazard to guess who the guy is

Makes no sense but has a nice cadence, hmm?
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i'm confused by the nonsense
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Any new poems lately?
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Well I haven't any poems but I did write a chorus for a song about how there are only teeny bopper songs about love and hate on the radio. It's like the songs are all like "Oh I love you! be my boyfriend!" and they're all like "Oh I hate you! I'm breaking up,you never call!" so here's the chorus of what I think:

Hate songs Love songs
can't you ever make up your mind?
and get off the radio
Hate songs Love songs
Can't you just all get along?
and stay off my radio
You say that I've never heard it before
I'm gonna turn off the radio
You say that it's new and popular
Oh look I turned off the radio

I can only come up with a chorus. I have to get a break-down and middle words before I'm thru. Wish I could put up how the melody goes
Maybe after it's done I'll sing it and put it on you tube
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Old 03-19-2010, 05:09 PM
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For Seastar

Seastar the Tiger
She likes to write stories of highest swank
but I must confess I'm so bad
that even though I've been on this site so fad
I've never even read those so dapper
Oh dear I deserve a spank!
While I listen to Owl city,I find it hard to write
while this electronic beat echoes in my head
Please don't think I'm being making this trite
but you can say so when I'm dead.
The PWC,a marvalous book shop
is where I write but never read
I should be arrested by a cop
for doing such a deed!
So forgive me Seastar
you've read mine but me never yours
I'll read it someday after I'm done with chores
and put all my neglectance in a jar
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