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Old 11-05-2006, 02:01 AM
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Push the curtain of green, lush leaves aside, careful, mind you, and step into the world of the Nymphs. Meet Nianna, a nymph living in the forest nigh to Cair Paravel, who hums her days away while selecting flowers to adorn her hair.

What happens to her peaceful world when someone very new--very different--enters?


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sounds great!! post it!
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Old 11-05-2006, 04:34 PM
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Thanks!

The flowers were beautiful. They were surrounding the glade in which I lived, every colour of the rainbow galore. I hummed to myself, picking a few large ones and carefully setting them in my hair. Bending over the river, I looked at my reflection. No, the pink flowers were too big in my raven black tresses. I sighed and plucked them out, ready to try some smaller yellow ones.

As my hand reached up, cheerful noises and babbles reached my ears. I nearly jumped in surprise and leapt behind a rock covered in twining ivy. Carefully peeking from behind it, I caught sight of four human children. 'Children' may not have been the right word--in fact, only one looked like a child, though she seemed as though she were on her way to become a young lady.

One in particular caught my eye; he had slightly long brownish-blonde hair that wisped about his face. He was tall and looked the same age as me (if I were human, that is). Eyeing him curiously, I took a tentative step forwards, and then shrank back as the younger boy swept the area where I was.

With a quick motion, I leapt with ease behind another boulder so he wouldn’t be able to spot me. Those dark eyes seemed too serious and too critical for my liking. Their voices were not getting farther or closer, but I nimbly sprang over a few stones away from them, dropping my yellow flowers in the process.

Once again, I peeked out. I could only see the edge of a brightly hued dress whirling around accompanied with contagious giggling. This made me giggle as well, as nymphs love to laugh. That’s why I wondered why I wasn’t joining them. Maybe it was the darkness I sensed in that boy, even though it wasn’t bad darkness—it was a darkness that would forever linger there but wasn’t exactly negative.

The older boy with the blonde hair trotted over to the place near where I was hiding. He bent down and picked up the yellow flowers, staring at them, intrigued. Straightening up, he looked around, but I don’t think he saw anything. If he did, all he would have seen was two bright green eyes staring back at him.
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Wonderful! Post more!! This almost sounds like my story too, One Day as a Human. Only mine is about a Dryad.
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It's very good!
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that's really good! write some more!
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Wonderful! Post more!! This almost sounds like my story too, One Day as a Human. Only mine is about a Dryad.
Thankies! Ooo, that's cool. I'll try to check it out later.

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Thank you, I will try to write more when I can.
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it's awesome, post soon!
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it's awesome, post soon!
Here's another post. Sorry it's short, I'll try to get more in next post:

The next day, I was outside, frolicking with my fellow nymph friends. “Did you see those four humans the other day?” I asked them casually, plucking a flower from a cluster on the ground.

They shook their heads, curls swaying with the slight breeze. “Look’s like Nianna’s daydreaming again,” Vaele teased, giving me a bright smile. She twirled a blossom on her finger. “How old were they, anyways?”

I shrugged. “Two of them, a boy and a girl, looked our age. The other boy and girl were younger.”

“A boy our age?” Lua inquired, nudging my arm. “So perhaps you have been daydreaming about him!”

The glade was filled with ringing laughter.

“No,” I protested, turning a slight shade of pink at their bantering. I giggled nonetheless. “He’s human, after all.”

Lua told me, “Humans can be very nice, you know. The Kings and Queens of Narnia are human, and from what I’ve heard, they’re good rulers.”

“They’ve been ruling for four years now,” Vaele added knowledgably. My group of friends and I didn’t know very much of the current events; often we were too much in our own little world of birds and flowers to notice.

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That's lovely! Continue please!
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