A short critique of Copper's thread I make
I cast mine eye upon his antique verse
And after due consideration take
A smattering of feedback I disperse
A worthy stab he taketh at the task
To write a sonnet for each forum friend
My badger snicker with a paw I mask
And full straight face-ed to the work I bend
Shakespeare methinks hath reason not to fret
Twixt his own verse and that of bathroom wall
It neatly fits for merit shown and yet
It pleaseth me exceeding after all
Of five stars in the heavens bright there be
I rate this thread a total score of three
(Don't kill me... )
I cast mine eye upon his antique verse
And after due consideration take
A smattering of feedback I disperse
A worthy stab he taketh at the task
To write a sonnet for each forum friend
My badger snicker with a paw I mask
And full straight face-ed to the work I bend
Shakespeare methinks hath reason not to fret
Twixt his own verse and that of bathroom wall
It neatly fits for merit shown and yet
It pleaseth me exceeding after all
Of five stars in the heavens bright there be
I rate this thread a total score of three
(Don't kill me... )