Narnialove
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I know I haven't written in awhile but here it is.
It's called Stuck in a dream
When I was out on a midnight night walking past the sand dunes with the cutie at my side who with his blonde hair that curls onto his forehead and oh those blue eyes . We stopped at the foot of the ocean as the waves lapped at our feet. I leaned in ,when a horrifying realization came to me when I opened my eyes to see me with my lips
sticking out and my best friend looking at me curiously. I sighed and drew back my lips as she laughed.
"Morie what is going on with me" I asked tired.
"maybe your too much in love with your fantasy man?’ she asked. I sighed again as I looked back at when I was in grade 5 whispering about this guy I had imagined and looked* so handsome.I*grabbed my books from my locker and walked with my friend down the
corridor.
“He was so handsome and we were about to …”I said as I started to day dream again.
‘snap out of it Edaline this guy is not real and you know it” she said as she shook my arm.
“I know but he is like perfect” I said as she shook her head.
“but you will never get married for you still have your sights on this fantasy man and no one will meet to your standards.” she said in exasperation.
“but…’I protested. Then she cut me off.
“no buts and what about Lionel he’s like the hottest guy in the school and he seem to be interested” she said as we passed by a bunch of boys.
“he isn’t him though is he?’ I asked.
‘Edaline you are going to lose it one of these days if you keep it up like this” she said wagging her finger at me. I tried to change the subject by laughing and talking about the next game. She gladly began to talk and I continued to dream.
“Edaline how many times did I tell you to not to leave the door open?” my mom yelled from the kitchen.
“a lot’ I asked. I heard her sigh from the kitchen and I hung up my coat. I went upstairs to my room which was in a little sort of tower. There was a revolving walk in closet and lots of clothes everywhere and my flute was in the corner where I left it the before he took over my thoughts. I leaped into my bed and dreamed over my dream guy who I just couldn’t name because it seemed like sacrilege. The phone rang and I answered.
“hello?” I asked.
“hey this is Lionel” I rolled my eyes as he talked some more.
“hey”
“I just want to ask if you would like to go out with me?” He asked. My heart skipped a beat and I asked myself if I should when Morie’s voice echoed in my brain.
“sure” I said.
“great, how about Friday at 7:00?”He asked.
“sure”
“bye” I hung up and called Morie
“OMG you are going to go out with Lionel the hottest guy in the school and you don’t even like him?” she said trying to be angry but I could totally tell she was excited for me.
“yeah I know” I said as we walked to English.
“this is so great but watch out for Aniline who will be all over you since she set her eyes on her she is enraptured with him.” she advised me. Then right on cue Aniline showed up with her group. She was a Chinese with long jet black hair and eyes that curved upwards. The sad thing was that she was a jerk.
“hello Edaline I heard your going to go out with my boyfriend.”
“He’s not your boyfriend ”Morie spoke up.
“Shut up Morie and know your place even though when we were younger and you were my friend and in my group it doesn’t give you any reason to disrespect your betters“, She said with a cruel grin. Morie was hurt and looked at her feet.
“you better watch your step Edaline Morich for you will be wishing you were never born.” she hissed as she walked past. I stared after them as they walked away. I knew that I should be glad since I got the hottest guy in love with me but I just wanted the man of my dreams.
“How many Edalines does it take to change a light bulb’ Miren asked me. I shook my head as I took a bite of my sandwich.
“none because you don’t know how to” he said teasing me.
“ha ha very funny” I said as I gave him a playful shove.
“He is quite the comedian and it’s the truth though face it you know you cant change it” she said with laughter in her voice. I smiled at her and continued eating my sandwich when Aniline stood up from the popular table and everyone became silent. She faced me and said in a loud voice.
“Edaline is a no good back stabbing jerk face” she said with a smug grin
“what a creep” Morie asked. I couldn’t answer her because I was so furious for being ridiculed for going out with a guy who was so not her boyfriend. They were now on a new level a very low level .I stood up bravely with fire in my eyes and said loudly for all to her
“Aniline Chong you have crossed the line with this foolish talk of me being a backstabber when you don’t have any morals to speak of.” I paused and gazed at the girl who was too shocked to speak and continued.” You have told countless tales and secrets of your friends to others and laughed about them like Courtney Dawson who you told about the boogie incident” Everybody laughed about that and Courtney glared at Aniline. I stood waiting for her to make another accusation when she turned around and swiftly left with her few followers in tow. I breathed a sigh of relief and sat down again as everything continued on as if nothing happened.
“hmm Morie do you like the pink or the light pale blue?” I asked as I held up the dresses against me trying to decide.
“The blue looks lovely actually but pink has some quality as well…”
“Morie please help me choose I need of your services” I said exasperated.
“Then the blue one it is” she said. The blue one was a shirt that was long and was a
V necked, and showed a picture of a cloud with the words of don’t let the clouds bother you. I find that the blue was actually quite cute. I left an hour later with my arm tucked under his as we head into the restaurant .I took a seat and we chatted on light subjects for awhile until we ordered and had our dinner.
‘so what are you doing in your free time?’ he asked pleasantly.
“oh nothing much” I said. This date was actually boring and I glanced a lot at my watch a lot. We were going home when a car showed up in front of us. He tried to stop the car we went around in circles. I soon fell against the window and went into unconsciousness.
It's called Stuck in a dream
When I was out on a midnight night walking past the sand dunes with the cutie at my side who with his blonde hair that curls onto his forehead and oh those blue eyes . We stopped at the foot of the ocean as the waves lapped at our feet. I leaned in ,when a horrifying realization came to me when I opened my eyes to see me with my lips
sticking out and my best friend looking at me curiously. I sighed and drew back my lips as she laughed.
"Morie what is going on with me" I asked tired.
"maybe your too much in love with your fantasy man?’ she asked. I sighed again as I looked back at when I was in grade 5 whispering about this guy I had imagined and looked* so handsome.I*grabbed my books from my locker and walked with my friend down the
corridor.
“He was so handsome and we were about to …”I said as I started to day dream again.
‘snap out of it Edaline this guy is not real and you know it” she said as she shook my arm.
“I know but he is like perfect” I said as she shook her head.
“but you will never get married for you still have your sights on this fantasy man and no one will meet to your standards.” she said in exasperation.
“but…’I protested. Then she cut me off.
“no buts and what about Lionel he’s like the hottest guy in the school and he seem to be interested” she said as we passed by a bunch of boys.
“he isn’t him though is he?’ I asked.
‘Edaline you are going to lose it one of these days if you keep it up like this” she said wagging her finger at me. I tried to change the subject by laughing and talking about the next game. She gladly began to talk and I continued to dream.
“Edaline how many times did I tell you to not to leave the door open?” my mom yelled from the kitchen.
“a lot’ I asked. I heard her sigh from the kitchen and I hung up my coat. I went upstairs to my room which was in a little sort of tower. There was a revolving walk in closet and lots of clothes everywhere and my flute was in the corner where I left it the before he took over my thoughts. I leaped into my bed and dreamed over my dream guy who I just couldn’t name because it seemed like sacrilege. The phone rang and I answered.
“hello?” I asked.
“hey this is Lionel” I rolled my eyes as he talked some more.
“hey”
“I just want to ask if you would like to go out with me?” He asked. My heart skipped a beat and I asked myself if I should when Morie’s voice echoed in my brain.
“sure” I said.
“great, how about Friday at 7:00?”He asked.
“sure”
“bye” I hung up and called Morie
“OMG you are going to go out with Lionel the hottest guy in the school and you don’t even like him?” she said trying to be angry but I could totally tell she was excited for me.
“yeah I know” I said as we walked to English.
“this is so great but watch out for Aniline who will be all over you since she set her eyes on her she is enraptured with him.” she advised me. Then right on cue Aniline showed up with her group. She was a Chinese with long jet black hair and eyes that curved upwards. The sad thing was that she was a jerk.
“hello Edaline I heard your going to go out with my boyfriend.”
“He’s not your boyfriend ”Morie spoke up.
“Shut up Morie and know your place even though when we were younger and you were my friend and in my group it doesn’t give you any reason to disrespect your betters“, She said with a cruel grin. Morie was hurt and looked at her feet.
“you better watch your step Edaline Morich for you will be wishing you were never born.” she hissed as she walked past. I stared after them as they walked away. I knew that I should be glad since I got the hottest guy in love with me but I just wanted the man of my dreams.
“How many Edalines does it take to change a light bulb’ Miren asked me. I shook my head as I took a bite of my sandwich.
“none because you don’t know how to” he said teasing me.
“ha ha very funny” I said as I gave him a playful shove.
“He is quite the comedian and it’s the truth though face it you know you cant change it” she said with laughter in her voice. I smiled at her and continued eating my sandwich when Aniline stood up from the popular table and everyone became silent. She faced me and said in a loud voice.
“Edaline is a no good back stabbing jerk face” she said with a smug grin
“what a creep” Morie asked. I couldn’t answer her because I was so furious for being ridiculed for going out with a guy who was so not her boyfriend. They were now on a new level a very low level .I stood up bravely with fire in my eyes and said loudly for all to her
“Aniline Chong you have crossed the line with this foolish talk of me being a backstabber when you don’t have any morals to speak of.” I paused and gazed at the girl who was too shocked to speak and continued.” You have told countless tales and secrets of your friends to others and laughed about them like Courtney Dawson who you told about the boogie incident” Everybody laughed about that and Courtney glared at Aniline. I stood waiting for her to make another accusation when she turned around and swiftly left with her few followers in tow. I breathed a sigh of relief and sat down again as everything continued on as if nothing happened.
“hmm Morie do you like the pink or the light pale blue?” I asked as I held up the dresses against me trying to decide.
“The blue looks lovely actually but pink has some quality as well…”
“Morie please help me choose I need of your services” I said exasperated.
“Then the blue one it is” she said. The blue one was a shirt that was long and was a
V necked, and showed a picture of a cloud with the words of don’t let the clouds bother you. I find that the blue was actually quite cute. I left an hour later with my arm tucked under his as we head into the restaurant .I took a seat and we chatted on light subjects for awhile until we ordered and had our dinner.
‘so what are you doing in your free time?’ he asked pleasantly.
“oh nothing much” I said. This date was actually boring and I glanced a lot at my watch a lot. We were going home when a car showed up in front of us. He tried to stop the car we went around in circles. I soon fell against the window and went into unconsciousness.