Cool short story! It was shorter and less detailed than how I write. Which is probably why i have such a hard time finishing the stories I start! I liked it!
Thanks for liking it. I usually write longer than this, but for some reason this is the way the story was wanting to go. It is sometimes hard to finish books. I just can't wait until I have the freedom to write whenever I want, and not have to think about school. I'm going to read your Hunger Games story sometime. I will let you know what I think about it when I do.