Commas have always been a weak spot for me, I either put too many in or too few in, haha. So thanks, again. xD
Yes, Dorthy can be very amusing sometimes (though not always purposfully) but she has her serious moments. You'll find that out later.
PS. Have you been reading my other books, MissR? If so, how far have you gotten in them?
(This chapter takes it up a notch.
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Chapter six
Khain comes to Reandalawo
Milkyway scrambled though the forest at a breakneck speed. Her paws were cut and stung as she pounded down on the forest floor, and her side ached and burned where it had been torn open by a sword. Nevertheless she had been given a mission and she was determined to fulfill it.
Milkyway had been the only creature of her village to escape Khain’s evil clutches. She was part of an orphanage that had been in the town that had been Khain’s latest recruiting office so to speak. The orphanage had been overrun by the vilest assortment of creatures who were under orders to take all the young creatures they found to Khain, so Milky had made sure she wasn’t found.
Her escape had been narrow, and she had not come out unscathed, but the young she-cat knew that she must deliver her urgent message- the message that Khain was tired of fooling around with tiny villages and was headed for the biggest prize of them all,
Reandalawo.
Milky had also overheard that Khain was sending a force of two hundred wolves and one hundred rat archers to take Meandrao, Reandalawo’s smaller, slightly weaker sister fortress.
So the young cat charged on, leaping over fallen logs, stumbling through thorn bushes and kicking up leaves in her haste.
It was then no surprise the watchful eye of a young black forester spotted her.
“Halt! Yes, you! Stop right there!” the second-best forester cat scout ever, Midnight, leaped down in front of Milkyway, stopping her mad rush.
“Now, now! What’s this? A little she cat running through the forest on her own, and wounded too! What is afoot? Something big, I’d guess, I’ve been smelling it for days, ever since Mozart and the rest became adults. Well now, speak up! What’s your urgent errand?”
“Ka-Ka-Khain!” stammered Milkyway.
“Ka-whosit-whatsit?” asked Midnight.
“Khain! The Wolfking! Leader’a the Wolf h’army! He’s gonna kill us h’all and I gotta warn Reanlawo!” she gasped.
“Whoa, ho, ho liddle missy! Khain? A Wolfking? What nonsense is this? There are no Wolfkings anymore! Mozart killed Cogg! He’s dead! You’re mixed up, I’m afraid, little one.” Midnight said, a bit surprised.
“Am not! I seen ‘im wit me own eyes! Its Khain I tell ya, not Cogg who’s ravagin’ this forest! It’s free no more!”
Maybe it was the conviction in the little cat’s voice or the fire burning in her eyes that convinced Midnight she was telling the truth, but somehow Midnight could tell that she was not making this up. The young gray-and-white she cat was dead serious and that fact chilled Midnight to the bone.
“Well then make haste! Follow me, I can get us to Reandalawo right quick, I can! Always keep my tail in sight! And hurry!” Midnight took off like an arrow from a bow, with Milky just behind.
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