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Narnia's #1 fan
02-07-2006, 03:14 AM
................................lol
i've memorized like...the last 5 paragraphs of the last battle, and i say them to myself constantly when i want to feel at extreme peace or happiness

i personally want the last battle ( movie to end this way ):
( slow, calm, maybe sad music in background ) the kids are all standing there looking at Aslan with sadness, he says
"you do not look as happy as i mean for you to be"...Lucy replies
"Oh Aslan, we are sad, we are afraid of leaving, and you have sent us back to our world so often." Aslan pauses ( 7 sec. or so ) with an expression of sadness for the children, then the kind but strong smile comes, and he says
"No fear of that now" ( slight pause ) "for have you not guessed?"
There is about a 8-10 second pause as the kids get excited in their hearts, but are puzzled. Aslan says "there was apparently a real railway accident, your father, your mother, and all of you are now, as you used to call it in your shadowlands.....dead" ( strongest smile comes into view, music starts getting stronger hinting at the glorious ending ) " The term is over, the holidays have begun...the dream has ended.....this is the morning" ( and then everything becomes practically 90% light, as you see him and Narnia, the music is at it's strongest point, Aslan takes a few paces forwards, then turns to the children with the most beautiful smile and expression of his face. Then the screen starts to dim, but the music stays strong as you hear the Narrator ( someone with a strong voise, Liam Neeson, Ian McKellan SOMEONE ) representing C.S Lewis say the last ( and most beautiful ) words of the entire series.
" and as he spoke, he no longer looked to them like a lion; but the things that happened after that were so great and beautiful that i cannot write them.
And as for us this is the end of all the stories, and we can most truly say that they all lived happily ever after. But for them, it was only the beggining of the real story. All their life in this world and all their adventures in Narnia had only been the cover and the title page: now at last they were beginning Chapter one of the great story which no one on Earth has ever read: which goes on forever: in which every chapter is better than the one before"

( the music comes to a great truimphant stop, with the powerful and most great roar from Aslan in ALL the movies combined. The screen darkens,
credits start rolling.......it is the end of the great adventures.

Charn_Tim
02-07-2006, 03:24 AM
Wow, that's awesome! I hope it's that good :). LB is probably my favourite of the whole series as well.

i love skandar
02-07-2006, 03:36 AM
Hey yeah that sounds great!!!! :D Maybe you should produce it!!!!! Just kidding lol ;)

lions mane
02-07-2006, 03:40 AM
wow! i couldn't have put it into better words my-self.
in fact i'm not ganna even try to top that, that's how good it was. if the ending to T.L.B. is anything like that it will be well worth the wait.

Elendil
02-07-2006, 04:27 AM
Thats great!!! I couldn't think of anything better myself!!!

holyboy
02-07-2006, 07:09 AM
That was great work, Narnia's #1 fan

I'm just gonna move this to Hunt for the Stag where it can get more praise.

sarahnarnia1983
02-07-2006, 02:24 PM
that is truely amazeing i imgined it just in a flash in those words. well done

Spare Oom
02-07-2006, 07:28 PM
Brilliant, Narnia's #1 fan! Your ideas bring out the sheer poetry of those final paragraphs.

Narnia's #1 fan
02-07-2006, 10:03 PM
thx everybody, im going to start another thread again actually
it's kinda a petition also, but it's about the narrating part at the end

" and as he spoke, he no longer looked to them like a lion; but the things that happened after that were so great and beautiful that i cannot write them.
And as for us this is the end of all the stories, and we can most truly say that they all lived happily ever after. But for them, it was only the beggining of the real story. All their life in this world and all their adventures in Narnia had only been the cover and the title page: now at last they were beginning Chapter one of the great story which no one on Earth has ever read: which goes on forever: in which every chapter is better than the one before"

im going to see if i can get a petition going to insist that they have someone at the end of THE LAST BATTLE say these words...for they are shear poetry nd they are some of the ( if not the most ) beautiful words in the series, and deserve to be heard.
Whaddaya say? think it's worth a shot? :)

Narnia's #1 fan
02-07-2006, 10:06 PM
oh yeah, and feel free to post your visions of the films also ;)

lions mane
02-08-2006, 03:01 AM
i think that it's deffinitely worth the shot. i mean it's the least they can do for gettig rich off lewis's work, right?

and i would post but i'm just scared out of my wits no one would agree with me! :o

SailorSaturn13
02-13-2006, 11:33 PM
thx everybody, im going to start another thread again actually
it's kinda a petition also, but it's about the narrating part at the end

" and as he spoke, he no longer looked to them like a lion; but the things that happened after that were so great and beautiful that i cannot write them.
And as for us this is the end of all the stories, and we can most truly say that they all lived happily ever after. But for them, it was only the beggining of the real story. All their life in this world and all their adventures in Narnia had only been the cover and the title page: now at last they were beginning Chapter one of the great story which no one on Earth has ever read: which goes on forever: in which every chapter is better than the one before"

im going to see if i can get a petition going to insist that they have someone at the end of THE LAST BATTLE say these words...for they are shear poetry nd they are some of the ( if not the most ) beautiful words in the series, and deserve to be heard.
Whaddaya say? think it's worth a shot? :)

However, Susan's fate SHOULD be mentioned. Not all people are children who can happily ignore her. Maybe SHE should say those last words...

lions mane
02-14-2006, 01:48 AM
However, Susan's fate SHOULD be mentioned. Not all people are children who can happily ignore her. Maybe SHE should say those last words...
oh my god!

that's such a good idea!

Deep_Magic
03-02-2006, 06:10 AM
Wow what a great ending u came up with for them to play out!!
Maybe the voice over could be Susan, Im not sure!

EveningStar
03-02-2006, 06:27 AM
I remember reading a biography of C.S. Lewis and they quoted that passage at the end after speaking of how he died. I thought that was so wonderful.

Good work, #1.

Malacandra
03-02-2006, 11:41 AM
However, Susan's fate SHOULD be mentioned. Not all people are children who can happily ignore her. Maybe SHE should say those last words...

Hmm... Susan speaking the voice-over about a land she doesn't believe in? :cool: