Daughter of Eve

[Menagerie]

OK, we've all heard the story of how the four Pevensies arrived at and saved Narnia. But what if there was another human? One that had arrived BEFORE them? She escaped the detection of the White Witch, living solely on her ability to disappear at will. This is her story, and how she lived to be Queen Valsa, wife of High King Peter.



This is the teaser. Now, are you guys interested or not? Please be honest with what you think.

[Charn_Tim]

Um, do you mean they arrived after King Frank and Queen Helen, Digory and Polly, as in the Magician's Nephew? Because of course these humans were there before the Pevensies. I think it could be an interesting story to make of humans who came some time between the Jadis' conquest of Narnia and subsequent rule and the four Pevensies coming to Narnia...

[Menagerie]

Yes. She arrives between TMN and LWW. So is this good, bad........ok?

[Rhyanidd]

okk....sounds ok....but I dont think I will be as able to believe it, since Lewis never said anything about a wife of peter....question....why does everybody always wright about "peters wife" why doesnt edmund ever get a wife????

[Charn_Tim]

Well, I think it sounds pretty cool :). Maybe you could say she only reveals herself to certain creatures and as a side note it is part of the reason the book, "Is Man a Myth" and others like it are written and find their way onto the bookshelves of creatures like Mr. Tumnus. Of course this will only be one small part of the story, but it's just an idea...

Also, how does she disappear? You mean she can go back and forth between our world and Narnia at will or literally disappear in Narnia at will? Anyway, it sounds like it could be a pretty good story :)

[Rhyanidd]

charn I am not saying it wont be as good....its just going to be harder for me to believe it because lewis didnt have that in his...and nobody answered my question!!

[Rhyanidd]

I am not saying it isnt ok. I am just saying its going to be harder for me to believe...why is that so hard to understand?!?! if its really well written then I may believe...I just have a hard time believeing something that wasnt written by the origanal author...it doesnt mean I dont like it...it could be very good....just I may not imagine Narnia...but another world.....also...why does everybody always write about Peter geting a wife, why doesnt Edmund ever get a wife? it all seems very prejudice to me!!(ok this is half sarcasm...the part about the wives)

[Charn_Tim]

charn I am not saying it wont be as good....its just going to be harder for me to believe it because lewis didnt have that in his...and nobody answered my question!!
LOL-maybe you should write about Edmund's wife then!! :)

Yeah, that's cool, obviously there is no right or wrong in the case of whether Lewis would have wanted them to have wives or not, it's just opinion. And I do actually think it would make a good story if someone wants to write about it...

[Rhyanidd]

fine I will write about Eds wife....and its going to be me....I am somehow going to end up in the golden age of narnia!!! ok ok ok!! and I think it can be good...its just that I wont see narnia....I will probably see another one of the worlds that was in the wood with the pools!!!

[Menagerie]

OK, Reepicheepfan, the reason why I'm writing about Peter getting a wife is because he is the oldest, and the girl is 16, the same age as Peter. But, never fail, Edmund will get a little....SOMETHING in the story. ;) You just have to read it to find out. >:)

[Rhyanidd]

*throws up hands in frustration* I dont think you guys understand what I am saying!!...not thaT I AM OPPOSED...just its gonna be harder for me to believe...do ya understand mateys?

[Menagerie]

Here's a little description of Valsa and her friend, Salise. Valsa: 5'4, light brown hair, dancing violet eyes, and a flawless, dark brown skin tone. She has a strange power to be able to blend with all her surroundings, and slither through the tightest of spaces. She is good with the bow, but prefers the sword. Salise: 5'2, black hair, vivid green eyes, and a pale, almost glasslike skin tone. Her specialness comes with a very thin frame, and the power to become so small, not even a tick could find her. She is the opposite of Valsa, good with the sword, but prefers the bow.

This should tide you over 'til I come up with the first chapter. (Happy Reepicheepfan? :))

[Menagerie]

I'm gonna have to get off! Ttyl ya'll!

[Charn_Tim]

Menagerie, that sounds really cool. I'll be looking forward to reading the story as much as I can :).

[Rhyanidd]

yes I am excited to read it.....but never mind...I wont try to explain myself any further!!

[laugh_a_lot]

it sounds very interesting! cant wait!