The stars

[NARNIANKNIGHT]

I came up with this poem when I was in bed and I thought that it was cool so I wrote it and put it here. Let me know what you think. Thank you. :)

The stars in hollywood,
The stars in sports,
The stars in music,
The stars in movies,
The stars on t.v.,
But there are stars in the sky so bright and beautiful and God made them all. These people that are called stars are not really stars just people. They think that they are more special than everyone but they are not. Everyone is a star bright and beautiful.

NARNIANKNIGHT

[EveningStar]

I can't take credit for this one...it goes to Omar Kayaam. But it speaks along the lines of what you said. I thought I'd share it with you.

The night has a thousand eyes
The day but one
But the light of the whole world dies
With the setting sun

The mind has a thousand eyes
The heart but one
But the light of the whole soul dies
When love is done

[Rhyanidd]

Too true too true NARNIANIGHT...
I really like you poem Chakal...or whosever it is...the one you posted...there that works!....