"Hidden Dreamer" (my songs and poems)

[WillsGirl]

I guess... I just want another place to get my feelings out.
And I wouldn't mind some feed back. I mean... I do kind of want to know if I'm on the right trach here. I LOVE to sing but I don't have a lot of expieriance writing lyrics so... I'm just going to post some things.

I wrote this song after my family went through "The Cancer Wars"


To See Your Face

Through the window I watched it rain,
Through my tears I watched your pain.
You were there in every thought,
I was scared but you were not.

Chorus:
And I will wait 'till kingdom come,
To see your face, the way it was,
Before the rain
Before the pain
To go back in time, and just play again.

I was lost,
In the darkness there,
I counted cost,
But didn't care.
I wanted you,
to be whole again.
I missed my cue,
And fell into sin.

Chorus

Through the songs
And through the nights
Oh how long,
Without light?
I saw you change, day by day
Stuck in a cage, with nothin' to say.

Chorus

We made it through one tough year,
But not without a thousand tears.
And I have yet, to see your face,
The way it was before life changed.

Chorus

Bridge:
To go back in time, and just play again,
Like the good 'ole times, my brother friend.

Now I know, we all have changed,
And life will never be the same,
But I still wait wait, to see your face,
the wat it was,
Before Cancer came

[daughter-of-eve]

Wow...you are so good at writing! What a gift you have!

It's hard to come by, being a good writing. Trust me, you don't want to hear my songs and stories...;)

[WillsGirl]

I bet they are good but to tell you the truth... My writings were NEVER as good as they were DURING hard times and no AFTER.
Life expieriances tend to help A LOT
And sadly enough I HAVE been through plenty of hard times. It's easier to write what you know, not what you don't I tend to know hardship and reality so I write about it and so my writings end up... kinda depressing.

[giselle]

You're so talented, really. My eyes are a little wet now. It just happens that my family was in a similar situation. We went through hard times and one of those persons had cancer. She taught me a lot of things, the family was suffering; but you could see in her eyes, a peace so hard to find these days.

And I know what you mean. Six months after she passed away, other person of the family did. Songs or other types of writing are better just in those moments. I knew that because I've been writing songs since I was a child, and when I knew that the person was so sick, I just began to sing. I could swear that was the most beautiful song I had ever written. It just seems to come from nowhere.

Thank you, you made me think about things I had forgotten and that I should not have.

[WillsGirl]

You are so sweet.
That reminds me of a poem I once wrote for the one sweet old woman in a past church. I wanted to give it to her the next time I saw her but she passed away much faster than I thought and I cried but gave the poem to her family.
I was a LOT younger then and it was BEFORE cancer so it's rather childish. I think I was like 11 or 12.

Here it is...

Mrs. Edith

So kind, so sweet,
She is a blessing to everyone she meets.
Frail but beautiful,
Love of so many keeps her heart full.
She is loved by all
and now she hears her call.
She is called home.
She is ready, waiting to go.
It grieves us to think of her not being here anymore.
But up there she will be free to soar.
Soar on wings.
That's where she wants to be.
So it's a little easier to be happy knowing that she's there,
handeled with the best of care.
I can just imagine enough to see,
See her strolling down those golden streets.
She might be thinking "This is Great"
She just might, while standing near those pearly gates.
She will be happy, that's for sure,
So now we can let go, while still knowing...
We love her.

[daughter-of-eve]

I'm sorry you both had such hard times, but the best is yet to come. And everyone who's passed away, you'll see them again.

You both are inspirations to stay strong during the toughest days.

[giselle]

I'm sorry you both had such hard times, but the best is yet to come. And everyone who's passed away, you'll see them again.

You both are inspirations to stay strong during the toughest days.

There are always hard times. I don't know someone who has not had at least one bad moment. But just like you said, the best is yet to come.

[WillsGirl]

I agree. And While God doesn't promise us easy lives, he DOES promise compassion, comfort, understanding, strength, and love!
That's nice for me to remember.

[giselle]

I agree. And While God doesn't promise us easy lives, he DOES promise compassion, comfort, understanding, strength, and love!
That's nice for me to remember.

If our lives were easy, then it would be completely pointless to live, because there would be nothing to fight for, nothing to laugh at and nothing to cry for.

I'm glad you have in mind that God gives people all those things you mentioned. I can't say that I'm close to any religion, I have my own thoughts about that matter, but I have to say I totally agree with what you are saying.

[WillsGirl]

Well thank you. Tou know it's only today that I was reminded of that.
"religion" has been hard for me because my dad was always a leader in our churches and we were always there to fix things and people are always judging me. So now it's better... right? No, now we have our own church and my dad is the pastor. The services are good but I don't have any friends and EVERYONE judges me so harshly because I'm the Pastor's daughter.
Even people who don't go to my church.
It's irritating and it makes it hard to have a steady walk with Christ but I'm working on it.
Thanks for being understanding. I know there are a lot of people who get offended when someone else shares their beliefs (No matter what they are.)

[laugh_a_lot]

wow. u really do amaze me. yes, i have had people in my family die of cancer. my mom almost did. well the doctors said she had it and then had surgery and it wasnt cancer so we were all freaked out. a lot of my family has died from cancer and ahlsymers(sry i dont kno how to spell it). i agree. life wouldnt be worth living without hardships.

[WillsGirl]

Thank you LaL that means a lot.
As far as my latest songs go. I only have bits and pieces so maybe I'll post them... maybe I'll wait but thank you all for being such a blessing to me!

[NarniaLuver111]

Gosh... I thought that I had been through hard times this summer... but compared to you guys I've been through nothing!

[Rose]

You are so good!! I am soo close to crying now.. :( Well...thumbs up.

[WillsGirl]

I'm sorry. It's not my intention just to make everyone cry. LOL. I guess it's just easier for me to write what I know.
I'm trying to finish some songs that I may see if my friends can help me out with like a band but we will see how well that will work. I am still swimming in notes and outlines for my next story so hang in there!
And Thank you for all of your loveley comments!

[Mar]

wow that was really good..heres one of my bands songs (copywrited)

Numb
-Pure Intention-

close my eyes
and see you now
watch you die
i wish i could save you somehow

chorus

will you see me
when the dark has come
will you hold be
with a heart still numb
i know you will come with me
but why do we stand here
why do you stand here

hide from lies
and call you here
you know my life
and i will not fear

(Chorus)

i will see you will you see me
i will call you please believe me
i will know you will you know me
i still love you do you love me

na na na
na na na

will you see me
when the dark has come

[WillsGirl]

That's cool. I don't have a band as I am a soloist but I have a friend who sings beautifully and another friend who plays piano but that only gets you so far... Here is a song I wrote in the heat of.... mixed feelings. LOL :o


How do I start?
What do I say?
I feel like someone broke my heart.
And it comes back day after day.
Don't try to fix me.
I'm not broken.
Why can't you see me?
For who I really am?
I know I'm not perfect.
I've made many mistakes.
But can't you see the effect?
Can't you see I ache?

Here I am, I'm crying!
Here I am, I'm trying!
Why am I such a failure?
Why can't I find my cure?
What's wrong with me?
Why can't anyone hear my screming?

Why do I feel so incomplete?
Why do I feel so alone?
Why do I fall back and retreat?
If only you could know.
I cannot explaine.
It's just too hard.
Why do I feel this way?
It's hiding in my heart.
But you don't have to understand.
You do fine just being you.
It doesn't matter how hard you try you just can't.
But I will find a way to change the things I do.

Here I am, I'm crying!
Here I am, I'm trying!
Why am I such a failure?
Why can't I find my cure?
What's wrong with me?
Why can't anyone hear my screming?

This is not the end.
Not for me.
I still have a friend.
I will find a way to be,
The person hidden inside.
I have to find a way to win.
I will make this world mine.
I can't stay here in my sin.
I have to get away,
Or I might just despair.
But here I lay.
Am I already there?

Here I am, I'm crying!
Here I am, I'm trying!
Why am I such a failure?
Why can't I find my cure?
What's wrong with me?
Why can't anyone hear my screming?

[giselle]

Well thank you. Tou know it's only today that I was reminded of that.
"religion" has been hard for me because my dad was always a leader in our churches and we were always there to fix things and people are always judging me. So now it's better... right? No, now we have our own church and my dad is the pastor. The services are good but I don't have any friends and EVERYONE judges me so harshly because I'm the Pastor's daughter.
Even people who don't go to my church.
It's irritating and it makes it hard to have a steady walk with Christ but I'm working on it.
Thanks for being understanding. I know there are a lot of people who get offended when someone else shares their beliefs (No matter what they are.)

That is really sad. I can't understand why people behave like that. The important thing is that you are your true self. Those moments are the best to find the people who really care about you and to know those who are and always will be loyal to you.

I'm surprised that people judge you because of that. In my country that is such a blessing. To have someone related in any way to a church is something to be proud of in most of the Mexican families.

I think that I'm not the only one grateful to you, because it is complicated to express our own feelings, but you make it in a very distinct and touching way.

I hope better times for you, you deserve it.

Giselle

[giselle]

wow. u really do amaze me. yes, i have had people in my family die of cancer. my mom almost did. well the doctors said she had it and then had surgery and it wasnt cancer so we were all freaked out. a lot of my family has died from cancer and ahlsymers(sry i dont kno how to spell it). i agree. life wouldnt be worth living without hardships.

That happened to my mother too, the last four years have been so difficult, but the important thing is that we are still here. Even in illness, we need to find a proper way to live. It is us who live now, when I am sad about all those times, I just think of a song that I love so much, it really helps me. (If you're interested, the son is "See the Sun," by Dido)

Giselle

[WillsGirl]

Wow... thank you. That was very touching.
But honestly... I don't deserv anything! I am a sinner and I don't always have righteous thoughts about the way my life is working. But I do appreaciate your understanding.
I have the chorus ONLY to a song I'm writing about people juging me.
Personally I AM proud to be a PK but It seems to put a target on my chest that says: Look at me! I'm not perfect! Point it out! Watch me, Wait for me to mess up!!!
yeah... that sux but I have gotten used to it a bit. People have been juging me my whole life, for everything from being a part of a big family, to being schooled so privately, or having my dad e a pastor or the clothes I wear or what and how I sing or that I wear make up and do my hair certain ways!
GOSH there is always something!
I really appreaciate your understanding. It makes me feel a whole lot better.
I think I'm going to go write some more songs and things anf I'll have to turn in early because school starts again tomorrow.
Thank you all for your beautiful words of encouragement!

~ Kate

[Christine~Pevensie]

i would love to hear you sing ur songs... the last song you wrote hit home for me.. its how i was feeling a few weeks before... :(

but in a good note, i love your writings! you're so talented and amazing, you always have me in awe with ur works ! cant wait for more.. hehe you know me ;) !

[WillsGirl]

i would love to hear you sing ur songs... the last song you wrote hit home for me.. its how i was feeling a few weeks before... :(

but in a good note, i love your writings! you're so talented and amazing, you always have me in awe with ur works ! cant wait for more.. hehe you know me ;) !
You are too kind... seriously. I don't deserv any of this... You should see Unseen_Dreams' work. She has REAL talent as an artist. SHE is the friend I was talking about who can sing so well. I would love to sing my songs but it's hard to find the PERFECT melody you know!
Again thank you...
you guys really don't have to keep commenting. I just... feel like venting sometimes... you know?

[Christine~Pevensie]

we like ur work..so keep venting !!! hehe it'll do everyone good !!!you get to let out ur feelings and we get to enjoy reading !!!!! ;)

[WillsGirl]

thanks. I don't usually write that much but... I don't know... things have been changing lately. School was like crashing head on into a brick wall! I am afraid of loding time to write and sing new songs just for fun... to work on my stories and things of the sorts. But I will try!
Thank you for your comments!

[EveningStar]

THROUGH THE WARDROBE
(composed online for my forum friends)

When rain comes down like curtains drawn
And memories of springtime gone
Would overtake my self control
And plunge in darkness deep my soul,
Between the worlds of pain and dreams
That netherworld where nothing seems
So real as hope, so free of guile
Invites me in to stay a while;
The wardrobe beckons me once more
To open wide its wooden door
And plunge with joy through fur and pine
To see the frosty lantern shine
To touch the lion's silky mane
And feel my heart renewed again

-- John Burkitt

[Jordo]

You are too kind... seriously. I don't deserv any of this... You should see Unseen_Dreams' work. She has REAL talent as an artist. SHE is the friend I was talking about who can sing so well. I would love to sing my songs but it's hard to find the PERFECT melody you know!
Again thank you...
you guys really don't have to keep commenting. I just... feel like venting sometimes... you know?



i love your songs!!!! they're so good!!!! dont under estimate your gift!!!!! where can i find Unseen_Dreams work? i like to read songs, i like to see what other people write so i can improve my songs.

[WillsGirl]

I can't give out that information as the permission has not been given to me but I'm sure if you all PM Unseen_Dreams and tell her just how much you want to see her beautiful lyrics she might concent!

[Mar]

thats VERY good! haha tell me if you like this one..(copywrited)


"Unknown"
Pure Intention

is it something else i cannot hide?
or am i hidden till i confide
wait for myself to die
or wait for my pride to fly
do i wait?
or decend?
there is no running away..

chorus:
what you want of me
is something i can't explain
will i let it go
or will i be running away
i will not hid
you'll see me fight
until the final da
will you let me go?
will they see?
or am i still unknown

watch me wanting life
when im finally taken away
wounded in my heart
and in my soul
still can't explain
am i here?
or am i gone?
this pain is unknown to me

(chorus)

bridge:
cry for anyone else
i'll cry for you
i'd die for you
don't leave me standing here
cuz im still one person
i'm still someone

(chorus 2x)



*any comments on that would be greatly appriciated! :D

[WillsGirl]

I don't want to discourage or offend. I think it's pretty darn good but it's a tad choppy and a little confusing.
But I still think it's pretty good.

[Mar]

thank you! i appriciate that really. we were working on that today actually at the studio..i guess with "choppiness"..but mainly tempo. but thank you really, the more comments the better :)

[WillsGirl]

I think it's cool that you have a band Mar.

HEY GUESS WHAT!!!
I have this opportunity to go record a demo CD and so my voice coach and my mom and I are probably going to go over some of my songs and write them out with the notes and everything so I can have my own original work on a cd!!!
I'm SO excited this is the perfect thing to boost my spirits. Last night I was totally blessed with this sudden overwhelming confidence and with a few imspired lines I wrote this new song!!!

Passion and Drive (COPYRIGHTED)

I’ve got Passion, I’ve got drive!
No more running, I won’t hide.
I’ve found determination,
I’m gonna storm the nation!

Chorus:
Do you see this smile?
It was gone for a while,
But now I have reassurance,
And now I’ve got endurance,
Is this the new me?
When did I break free?

I’m here, I’m back!
I’m not hiding behind the mask.
Do you see my happiness?
I found a way to clean the mess!

Chorus:
Do you see this smile?
It was gone for a while,
But now I have reassurance,
And now I’ve got endurance,
Is this the new me?
When did I break free?

This is supernatural,
I can feel the call!
Something’s here inside of me…
Oh the things I see!

Chorus:
Do you see this smile?
It was gone for a while,
But now I have reassurance,
And now I’ve got endurance,
I have broken free!
This is the new me!!!

I’m not the same anymore
Something’s different from before!
This joy that’s deep inside.
It’s for me, I know it’s mine!

Chorus:
Do you see this smile?
It was gone for a while,
But now I have reassurance,
And now I’ve got endurance,
I have broken free!
This is the new me!!!

I’m letting go of everything else now,
It’s not that hard, I just know how!
Something here is changing me,
Something inside is taking me.
I’m not frightened,
I’ve been enlightened.

Chorus:
Do you see this smile?
It was gone for a while,
But now I have reassurance,
And now I’ve got endurance,
I have broken free!
This is the new me!!!

Look at this change
It feels so strange.
Don’t be worried,
I’m still me,
But better than before,
I couldn’t ask for more.

Chorus:
Do you see this smile?
It was gone for a while,
But now I have reassurance,
And now I’ve got endurance,
I have broken free!
This is the new me!!!

[Mar]

HAHA great!!!! thats soo good! i want your CD when it comes out!!! i like your song also! we got great news today too! we are proabably gonna go on tour with barlowgirl! heres another song..its about someone dieing..


The Life I Own
-Pure Intention-

When I see you in my sleep
When there's no sense of a dream
When you're gone from this life
Will you be by my side?

I seem to be lost
Is this what life costs?
Will I find the right time
To be found in this life

(Chorus)
Can you see me when I'm under your feet?
Will I lie down my life to breath?
Will you know the words I can't repeat?
In this life I own still under defeat

When I laugh behind my tears
Still waiting over fears
I'll always feel hurt
When I see your ston in the dirt

When I cry for life's pain
When you see me run away
You will never forget
The prayers that I said

(Chorus)

Bridge:
Will you know me when I come to you?
Will you say "I knew I'd hold you soon"
Will you call my name and cry with me?
Will I come to you and never leave
Never leave

(Chorus)

[Mar]

oh yes and that last song is COPYWRITED! :)

[WillsGirl]

Barlow girl is Christian right? Are you guys a Christian band? I like your name.
I don't have to come up with a name... I get to use my own! LOL

[Mar]

yes they are. welll aaa yeah i guess you can..we like to call it posotive message. cuz we dont want to be labeled christan if we dont have to. cuz then some people will auotomaticlly not listen to it. did you like the song? tell me what you think..

[WillsGirl]

I like it... I especially like the brisge.
So how old are you gus? (The band) Is it all guys, all girls, a mix? How many of each?
I know that's random but now I'm curious.
Maybe I will see you guys on tour.
Do you personally know Barlowgirl?

[Mar]

well its four of us..me and my sister, and our two really good friends (who are sisters) and the ages are 15, 13, (me), 14, and 12..gina is 12 she wrote the song you just read, shes AMAZING. and no we do not know barlowgirl personally..have you heard of Pure Fashion?

heres the site: www.pureintention.net..(its not that good!)

[WillsGirl]

Are you Marri? Not to make you uncomfortable or anything... just trying to place ya. LOL, The site looks good...

[Mar]

yup thats me!..what state do you live in? haha just wondering

[WillsGirl]

Texas... the good 'ole Lone Star state... the funny thing is... people always think we ALL have these podunk accents and love country music. But I don't have an accent and I HATE country music. (Sorry, but I do...)
LOL what state do YOU live in?

[Mar]

haha thats good we have something in commen. I'm from CT (sorry don't feel like spelling)... ;)

[Mar]

i have to go clean up..i might be back later though..PM me we can chat about music and stuff.

[WillsGirl]

k bye......

[His Queen]

when there's a light
u know u found ur love
or else it is just hevan on earth

when there is love
the angels smile from above
and the earth beams its gratatude

when there is love
happeness jumps for joy

and there they stand hand in hand
as the only two people on earth

[His Queen]

im all alone
no one sat beside me
on this cold evning night
im all alone
no one here
no one there
for i ,
am all alone
im waiting
for the sky ,
to open and let flow
im all alone
im all alone
i need u here
oh yeh i need u here...

[His Queen]

like 'em ?????

[His Queen]

oh and here are some of the songs we sang at the white feather
a play ,a very big play in frount of somthing like 800 ppl

[WillsGirl]

They're very nice.

[His Queen]

H:\Hook2005\Architect.mp3

[His Queen]

soz can't seem to get them on here :( :(

[WillsGirl]

I'm sorry... I would help... but I can't. I'm not that smart.

[Rhyanidd]

There are always hard times. I don't know someone who has not had at least one bad moment.
MY ONLY BAD moments were from myself...when I did something I knew I shouldnt I havent been thourgh tough times....the only people in my family I have lost I didnt know very well....my one Grandfather when I was 6 weeks old and my other when I was 6 or 7 and I was always scared of him and not till I was older did I relize how much I loved him....and he loved me....But I havent been thourgh hard times so I feel myself a traitor...sorta....to you guys....because...I just do.....Willsgirl I dont mind your "depressingness" I am a person who prefers the sad stuff because the happy stuff tends to be stupid or unrealistic to a to far extent.....

[Rhyanidd]

That's cool. I don't have a band as I am a soloist but I have a friend who sings beautifully and another friend who plays piano but that only gets you so far... Here is a song I wrote in the heat of.... mixed feelings. LOL :o


How do I start?
What do I say?
I feel like someone broke my heart.
And it comes back day after day.
Don't try to fix me.
I'm not broken.
Why can't you see me?
For who I really am?
I know I'm not perfect.
I've made many mistakes.
But can't you see the effect?
Can't you see I ache?

Here I am, I'm crying!
Here I am, I'm trying!
Why am I such a failure?
Why can't I find my cure?
What's wrong with me?
Why can't anyone hear my screming?

Why do I feel so incomplete?
Why do I feel so alone?
Why do I fall back and retreat?
If only you could know.
I cannot explaine.
It's just too hard.
Why do I feel this way?
It's hiding in my heart.
But you don't have to understand.
You do fine just being you.
It doesn't matter how hard you try you just can't.
But I will find a way to change the things I do.

Here I am, I'm crying!
Here I am, I'm trying!
Why am I such a failure?
Why can't I find my cure?
What's wrong with me?
Why can't anyone hear my screming?

This is not the end.
Not for me.
I still have a friend.
I will find a way to be,
The person hidden inside.
I have to find a way to win.
I will make this world mine.
I can't stay here in my sin.
I have to get away,
Or I might just despair.
But here I lay.
Am I already there?

Here I am, I'm crying!
Here I am, I'm trying!
Why am I such a failure?
Why can't I find my cure?
What's wrong with me?
Why can't anyone hear my screming?
whoa now thats something I car relate to in every sense of the word!!

[Rhyanidd]

I was curious...I have a notebook of all my favorite songs...and stuff...Can I copyandpaste these then print them out....will you guys mind?? wait...I guess I cant do that with the copyrighted stuff huh?? oh, well can I do it with the undopyrighted stuff? or do you guys not want me too??? also Mar when are you going to be on tour? and where? I would like to try to make it to your concert!!

[WillsGirl]

Uh.... I'd preer to keep my original songs... But thanks for liking them

[Rhyanidd]

okey dokey...just wondering......thanks for puting them up here though!!!they rock my world!!

[WillsGirl]

No problem!
Thanks for showing so much interest... It's nice to meet you!

[Mar]

I was curious...I have a notebook of all my favorite songs...and stuff...Can I copyandpaste these then print them out....will you guys mind?? wait...I guess I cant do that with the copyrighted stuff huh?? oh, well can I do it with the undopyrighted stuff? or do you guys not want me too??? also Mar when are you going to be on tour? and where? I would like to try to make it to your concert!!
aa well it would be in july..but ill keep posting here to keep everthing up to date..so if any new news comes up..i will let you know how to get tickets and stuff. thank you!

[THEWHITEWITCH14]

I guess... I just want another place to get my feelings out.
And I wouldn't mind some feed back. I mean... I do kind of want to know if I'm on the right trach here. I LOVE to sing but I don't have a lot of expieriance writing lyrics so... I'm just going to post some things.

I wrote this song after my family went through "The Cancer Wars"


To See Your Face

Through the window I watched it rain,
Through my tears I watched your pain.
You were there in every thought,
I was scared but you were not.

Chorus:
And I will wait 'till kingdom come,
To see your face, the way it was,
Before the rain
Before the pain
To go back in time, and just play again.

I was lost,
In the darkness there,
I counted cost,
But didn't care.
I wanted you,
to be whole again.
I missed my cue,
And fell into sin.

Chorus

Through the songs
And through the nights
Oh how long,
Without light?
I saw you change, day by day
Stuck in a cage, with nothin' to say.

Chorus

We made it through one tough year,
But not without a thousand tears.
And I have yet, to see your face,
The way it was before life changed.

Chorus

Bridge:
To go back in time, and just play again,
Like the good 'ole times, my brother friend.

Now I know, we all have changed,
And life will never be the same,
But I still wait wait, to see your face,
the wat it was,
Before Cancer came
WOW that was good i like that so much will you let me know if you do any more thanks

[WillsGirl]

Oh WOW! Thank you!!!
I am working on some things right now... but the re arranging will make it better so I will wait!!!
I"M GOING TO MAKE A DEMO CD!!!
The FIRST one won't be MY originals but more classics that show off my range a little but who knows what might happen after that!?

[daughter-of-eve]

Wow! Congrats and good luck!!

[WillsGirl]

THANKS!!!!!
I am going to see THE JUSTIN BROWN TRANSLATION perform tonight!!! THEY ROCK!!!

[Rhyanidd]

*jumps up and down and screams for willsgirl*yaaaaay!! I am so excited fooor youooooooooooou!!!

[WillsGirl]

Thanks.
OMG The Justin Brown Translation is like my new FAV band!!!
THEY ARE SO TALENTED!!! Even with a cold!!! LOL
And they aren't bad looking either! I was gonna take some pics for y'all but it was so packed!!!
I think these guys are going far and I will be able to say... I knew some of the band!!! And I saw them before they were big!!!

[Rhyanidd]

good for you!!

[laugh_a_lot]

wow! hope u had fun! i love ur songs and poems! u should post more

[WillsGirl]

I wrote this kind of on the spot of this stupid situation that I got dragged into but really don't have any part in it and don't wish to. But it's just been yet another place for people to judge me, and yeah... so this is a rough draft of and "anger song."

I am so tired of being judged,
I hate being in the middle, I hate being bugged,
I'm not who you think I am,
I can do more than you think I can.
Stop hating me,
Stop judging me falsely.

Chorus:
You don't know who I am.
You say I am who you want me to be.
No one will listen to you, just stop this scam,
We both know this is not really me.

I know you're mad,
but don't ask me why.
This whole situation is bad,
But it isn't mine.
So don't get me involved,
I want nothing to do with this.
I don't care if this get's resolved,
It's all gone amiss.

Chorus:
You don't know who I am.
You say I am who you want me to be.
No one will listen to you, just stop this scam,
We both know this is not really me.

Just leave me alone,
I don't want to take a part
I was just fine on my own,
before someone meddled with hearts.
This whole thing makes me so mad,
The imiturity,
it's just a fad,
So don't even talk to me.

Chorus:
You don't know who I am.
You say I am who you want me to be.
No one will listen to you, just stop this scam,
We both know this is not really me.

I don't know where you stand,
But don't bother me,
This is my one demand,
The one I intend to keep.
This will all blow over.
And you will see it like I do when you all get older.

Chorus:
You don't know who I am.
You say I am who you want me to be.
No one will listen to you, just stop this scam,
We both know this is not really me.

So just figure it out,
all on your own.
Don't just sit there and pout,
I won't listen to your groan.
Just grow up,
and be mature,
suck it up
and endure.

[Mar]

yeah its pretty good. keep up the good work :)

[laugh_a_lot]

its very good! keep it up!

[laugh_a_lot]

wow, i just read the whole thing cuz i was a little confused so i wanted to say

(Wow... thank you. That was very touching.
But honestly... I don't deserv anything! I am a sinner and I don't always have righteous thoughts about the way my life is working. But I do appreaciate your understanding.
I have the chorus ONLY to a song I'm writing about people juging me.
Personally I AM proud to be a PK but It seems to put a target on my chest that says: Look at me! I'm not perfect! Point it out! Watch me, Wait for me to mess up!!!
yeah... that sux but I have gotten used to it a bit. People have been juging me my whole life, for everything from being a part of a big family, to being schooled so privately, or having my dad e a pastor or the clothes I wear or what and how I sing or that I wear make up and do my hair certain ways!
GOSH there is always something!
I really appreaciate your understanding. It makes me feel a whole lot better.
I think I'm going to go write some more songs and things anf I'll have to turn in early because school starts again tomorrow.
Thank you all for your beautiful words of encouragement!

~ Kate)

i always act like someone im not..at least ppl kno who u really are, and not wat u pretend to be.... i used to be in private school until i was in 5th grade then 6th grade i went to public, and i changed....i was sometimes made fun of and i couldnt seem to fit in with the ppl i liked...so i just, changed.....i love pink and girly things...but some discouraging things made me put these aside....i am very self conscious and so i was always embarrassed of myself...and so i never wear pink and i never wear girly things...i always wear a black jacket over anything i have on....anything i feel is too show offy or ppl would think i was a snob if i wore i dont wear....im very conservative...but thats just the show i put off....who i am inside isnt really like that...i want to be a writer more than anything, but i am scared. of failing and ppl making fun of wat i write. i like to sing too but i am embarrassed. but reading this has helped me a little. i just hope i can be myself someday. i like to listen to the song "unwritten" by natasha bedingfield...also "shut up" and "im just a kid" by simple plan but im not saying those have a very positive effect...really.........well, um, sry this is soo long!!!!!

and to mar... i would love to go to your concert too!!

[WillsGirl]

Thanks laugh-a-lot but I'm not always quite myself. I am mostly but there will always be the deeper part of me that only comes out when I am completely alone. I am more myself on here and with a few very close friends than most places but it's hard... people say I am different around my friends when really I think I might be different around my family or both and I don't even know what being myself is anymore.
Okay I know I must be confusing people more and more... I am working on a duet to sing with my friend sort of as a gift and then THE song I want to record as mine and when I am satidfied enough with them I will try to post them.

[abbyluvswilliam]

that is really amazing!!!

[WillsGirl]

What is amazing?

[Rhyanidd]

YOOOOU!!(10 thingy)

[WillsGirl]

Wow! Well... THANK YOU!!!!!

[mrstumnus99]

abbyluvswilliam meant your songs and poems are amazing. They are all so beautifully written. You are really good.

[WillsGirl]

Thank you! I just found out that I was excepted to the two week music camp I wanted to go to this summer!!!! YAY
I have voice in a few minutes so I have to go but I'll try to post more soon!

[Mar]

heyy willsgirl! i just wanted to know how the music stuff was going! i hope good. i know its crazy sometimes...but you are very talented so you shouldn't have any problems..well i shouldnt say ANY but. okay well yeah, just PM me or somthing and give me the "update" i'd love to hear from you!

thanks so much,
Mar <3

[WillsGirl]

Thanks Mar, I will!
As far as music careers taking off... go check out one of my favorite bands here: http://www.myspace.com/thejustinbrowntranslation
You can listen to a rough copy of their latest song Go and it is REALLY good! Here are the lyrics just to entice you!!!

Lyrics for "GO rough cut"
So I've found that life is often less than perfect,
but it's worth it.
And the good times that we know just could not be so
with out the bad to compare and contrast

CHORUS
So go. Play your part.
Don't let life break your heart.
You'll be fine.
So go. Llive your life.
You're gonna be alright.
Just give it time. Just give it time.

Some days may come when all you see is dark skies,
but open your eyes.
And with every breath you breath try your best to see
Even bad days can be beautiful so beautiful

CHORUS

The things you do
Tthe loves you lose
It's not always up to you

CHORUS

[WillsGirl]

So y'all tell me what you think of that band!

So here is another one of MY original songs and this is VERY rough but it will probably be the first original that I record and what not... It's called:

Compassion


I've got the weight of the world on my shoulders,
I see the girl who is hurt but no one holds her,
I see the poor boy struggling to be a man,
but he can't, no he can't,
and I see the people, calling for help,
but no one hears them, so they're all by themselves.

Am I the only one who sees this?
It's not that hard how could one miss it?

I don't have to be a hero,
I don't need to save the day,
But this feeling's got me so low,
And I can't push it away.

Chorus:
I want to see compassion,
I want a real reaction, from this world,
get rid of the distractions, give it a whirl,
and take your place,
show some love show some grace,
show some grace.

Bridge:
'cause I'm hiding alone
and I'm here on my own, (repeat)

So much poverty, so much crying,
not enough offering, not enough trying.

Let me stay here, and ponder these thoughts,
just as log as, I'm not too far lost,

Chorus

Can't you see?
What is happening?
You don't care anymore,
but you did before...

Chorus

I've got the wieght of the world on my shoulders

[Lady Larien]

All Of The Songs On Here Are Beautiful Some More Then Others Maybe But Still All Beautiful In Thier Own Way And Touching To Someone In This World!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To Narnia And The North, Allison

[WillsGirl]

Thank you Narnia_Queen!
BTW I love your banner!

[laugh_a_lot]

wow!!! ur songs are great! they actually have meaning and emotion behind them!!!!!!!!!! if u come out with a cd i would lovelovelove to buy it!

[WillsGirl]

Wow, that's one of the best compliments I have ever recieved. Thank you very much, you don't know what that means to me right now.

[DeplorableWord]

Good job! Those are great!!! Write more!!!!!!!! :)

[laugh_a_lot]

well i just want to tell u, if ANYONE discourages u, they are just jealous. if ANYONE tells you you cant do it, prove them wrong. if ANYONE says that you are very talented and should go as far as you can possibly go, listen.

[DeplorableWord]

Ya, I agree! You're great!!! :)

[WillsGirl]

Thank you laugh-a-lot, you make me feel more appreciated than I have felt in a long time.
Thank you EVERYONE.... I'm working on some big auditions and songs to sing so I haven't had a bunch of writing time.... I'll post more when I get it...
You guys really have no idea how much your words mean to me... thank you VERY much!

[Mar]

Thank you laugh-a-lot, you make me feel more appreciated than I have felt in a long time.
Thank you EVERYONE.... I'm working on some big auditions and songs to sing so I haven't had a bunch of writing time.... I'll post more when I get it...
You guys really have no idea how much your words mean to me... thank you VERY much!
heyyy wow its willsgirl!




whats the big auditions??

[WillsGirl]

Yes it's me... I know, I've been busy lately, I'm sorry...

Well, currently, just the star spangled banner but my mother wants to set up some more... she's even working on doing a recital type thing... we are working on Ave maria and I love how High it gets... it's really pretty... and then there are some things I will want to work on for the auditions at this summer program/camp I was accepted to...

[Mar]

Yes it's me... I know, I've been busy lately, I'm sorry...

Well, currently, just the star spangled banner but my mother wants to set up some more... she's even working on doing a recital type thing... we are working on Ave maria and I love how High it gets... it's really pretty... and then there are some things I will want to work on for the auditions at this summer program/camp I was accepted to...
thats great tha your mom is for your singing thing. i love ave maria really its a beautiful song, expecitally when someone pulls it off. i love the highness to, its fun to sing high lol.

[WillsGirl]

LOL, thank you! Yes my mom is really supportive and I love that!
The version of Ave Maria that I am singing is not the most widely known... it's a lot different from the version I WAS used to but now this one is stuck in my head and it's beautiful!
If you have ever heard Celtic Woman do Ave Maria that is the version I am singing.
Thanks for your support it really is wonderful!

[Rhyanidd]

wow thats so cool on the auditions! I have complete faith in your ability to wow everybody!

[WillsGirl]

Thank you so much! That is very sweet! Sometimes I lose faith in myself and I get all nervouse!
(Just to clear something up: My mom is very supportive but not a stage mom. LOL just sweet)
You guys are so good for me... I'm hoping to record a trach tomorrow at my voice lesson but we will see.

[Rhyanidd]

whooooooooooooooooooo! Willsgirl you cant lose faith in yourself! we all have faith in you! so just remember that!

[WillsGirl]

Reep, I love you.... LOL you guys are all so sweet!!!
I have a voice lesson today and I'm really hoping there might possibly be a way that we can record something so I can hear myself like everyone else hears me... Ave Maria keeps getting better and better so I am REALLY excited about that and my audition is on the 18th of Feb!!!!
I know you guys are already doing so much but could you please pray that I would really just hear how God wants me to go about this whole music career. I know that's where he wants me but I would really like some prayer for the right attitude: Confident in what God has given me but not cocky or... OVER confident.
THANKS GUYS!!! I cannot explain how touching your comments have been to me.

[Rhyanidd]

*;)*I love you too Willsgirl!.....yeah OF course I will pray and I am so excited for your audtions! ohmygosh! I am so happy! and I hope you do great! I know you will do great! where is your auditions at?......Gad! You write such awesome poems and songs and storys I wish I could hear you sing once, I bet you sound like my sisters friend Katy! Shes so cool and she has a gorgeous voice. I am sure you do too! Ok willsgirl I am so praying for you!

P.S. Can I have your autograph so I get it and can say 'I knew her before she was famous'?;)

[laugh_a_lot]

*;)*I love you too Willsgirl!.....yeah OF course I will pray and I am so excited for your audtions! ohmygosh! I am so happy! and I hope you do great! I know you will do great! where is your auditions at?......Gad! You write such awesome poems and songs and storys I wish I could hear you sing once, I bet you sound like my sisters friend Katy! Shes so cool and she has a gorgeous voice. I am sure you do too! Ok willsgirl I am so praying for you!

P.S. Can I have your autograph so I get it and can say 'I knew her before she was famous'?;)

omg!! i kno u will do great too!!! im prayin for ya! yes, i would like an autograph too....think how cool it would be to just be sitting around and someone comes up to me and asks " you know her?! you have her AUTOGRAPH?!!!" and be all like " of course i do! i knew her B4 she was famous!" that would be great! lol....wow, u've got me all nervous now.... but u dont need to be! im sure your great!!!! ( im also glad ur mom is supportive) good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[WillsGirl]

*;)*I love you too Willsgirl!.....yeah OF course I will pray and I am so excited for your audtions! ohmygosh! I am so happy! and I hope you do great! I know you will do great! where is your auditions at?......Gad! You write such awesome poems and songs and storys I wish I could hear you sing once, I bet you sound like my sisters friend Katy! Shes so cool and she has a gorgeous voice. I am sure you do too! Ok willsgirl I am so praying for you!

P.S. Can I have your autograph so I get it and can say 'I knew her before she was famous'?;)



omg!! i kno u will do great too!!! im prayin for ya! yes, i would like an autograph too....think how cool it would be to just be sitting around and someone comes up to me and asks " you know her?! you have her AUTOGRAPH?!!!" and be all like " of course i do! i knew her B4 she was famous!" that would be great! lol....wow, u've got me all nervous now.... but u dont need to be! im sure your great!!!! ( im also glad ur mom is supportive) good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


LOL, thank you so much! GUESS WHAT!!! You might actually be able to hear me!!! My voice coach found me a studio with a great rate and not TOO far away and they provide you with musicians!!!! So I'm going to be working on Ave Mari, Jesu Joy, Amazing Grace and some of my OWN stuff to sing in the studio!!! Then I will put it up on a myspace music site and you guys can hear it!!! I hope it all works out!!!
Thank you all very much for being SO supportive. My Audtition is at a baseball diamon and I have a lot to do in ONE week... and I just can't express how much your encouragement really builds me up!!!!
Is your sister's friend's name Katy Bardin by any chance? Reep?
And... are y'all serious about my autograph because I'm not that great and my handwriting sux!!! It doesn't even look like my name!!! LOL
But if you really do want it I can scan it up just for each of you! (If you were just playing I don't mind.)
Again thank you for being SO freaking wonderful!!!
If you have something you want me to write or a certain name you want me to write just PM me and I will and then I'll scan it in and try to fix it up for you!

[Rhyanidd]

LOL, thank you so much! GUESS WHAT!!! You might actually be able to hear me!!!
Oh my goodness! I am so happy, tell us when you put it up, oh and is the link in your buddy profile?

Thank you all very much for being SO supportive. My Audtition is at a baseball diamon and I have a lot to do in ONE week... and I just can't express how much your encouragement really builds me up!!!!
OK I think you will do great! And you can do it!

Is your sister's friend's name Katy Bardin by any chance? Reep?
No my sisters friends name is not Katy Bardin, In fact, I think you started a thread called 'TEXANS! HERE!' or something like that, so I asume you are from Texas, and I am not, so I do not think you would know this Katy....*;)*but its all good.

And... are y'all serious about my autograph because I'm not that great and my handwriting sux!!! It doesn't even look like my name!!! LOL
But if you really do want it I can scan it up just for each of you! (If you were just playing I don't mind.)
Yes! I am serious about your autograph! and I AM GOING TO COPY AND PASTE THE AUTOGRAPH YOU PUT UP, but would you mind writing one specificly for me? I'll PM you with what I would like you to say, heehee I did it to Katy, I got her autograph at her recital.....I love your songs, and so love your autograph!

Again thank you for being SO freaking wonderful!!!
No problem! We love you! (preety sure I speak for everybody who reads your junk*grin, just kidding about it being junk....!*

If you have something you want me to write or a certain name you want me to write just PM me and I will and then I'll scan it in and try to fix it up for you!
Ok I am so taking you seriously, I am taking you up on that!

[WillsGirl]

LOL, check you PM box!
Thank you again!!! You make me feel so... I don't know, just like I have a place... Special I guess... anyway! Thank you!

[laugh_a_lot]

im gonna pm u rite now...of course im serious!! ( autograph) lol......well have fun!! cant wait to hear u sing!!!!!!!!!!!

[Mar]

LOL, thank you! Yes my mom is really supportive and I love that!
The version of Ave Maria that I am singing is not the most widely known... it's a lot different from the version I WAS used to but now this one is stuck in my head and it's beautiful!
If you have ever heard Celtic Woman do Ave Maria that is the version I am singing.
Thanks for your support it really is wonderful!
sorry i hadent replied sonner.
yeah, ive heard many versions of the ave maria...andrea bocceli does it great!

[Rhyanidd]

So got anything else for us Willsgirl??????say yes??...please say yes!

[WillsGirl]

Well my most recent song is to me, the prettiest,.... LOL... but you can't hear it... but I can't post it because one) it's not done, and two) it's too personal for here.
But... I am still writing things and I will have something new soon.
Thank you all very much!
Please be praying for me this week, my allergies all of a sudden came back with tryouts this week!!! :eek: :o

[Rhyanidd]

*shoulders droop*awww she doesnt have anything else....*waa sob gasp gag choke break out into hysterics* willsgirl if you dont get anything soon there is a very good chance I might develop a stutter...pa-pa-palese dont do this to me!

[WillsGirl]

LOL, I'll see what I can do.

[Rhyanidd]

take your time I was just expressing my undying affaction for you....r things!

[Mar]

Well my most recent song is to me, the prettiest,.... LOL... but you can't hear it... but I can't post it because one) it's not done, and two) it's too personal for here.
But... I am still writing things and I will have something new soon.
Thank you all very much!
Please be praying for me this week, my allergies all of a sudden came back with tryouts this week!!! :eek: :o
ohhhhh :(
yeah, when your going to a big audition or recording or anything you shouldnt eat any dariy. thats just what my voice teacher says....so yeah and load up on the water ;)

[laugh_a_lot]

oh im sry! my allergies have been acting up lately..it seems they always come when u least want them..but when do we ever want them? :) have fun!

[WillsGirl]

Thank you!
Thankfully, th audition was moved due to freezing cold Texas weather ! :D lol
And so now I have two weeks to get this worked on and completely recovered. I think I may have a cold. :(
I'm so sad that I can't sing though! I had no idea how much I just sing for the fun of it... it's very depressing! :(

[Rhyanidd]

ah yes...I cant sing worth rotten tomatoes....but I love to sing for the fun of it!

[laugh_a_lot]

rotten tomatoes? how interesting...i have a cold too! :( well i hope ur voice recovers in time!!!!!

[WillsGirl]

Thanks guys! I am now ABLE to sing but it's not my usual... ability I guess...

[laugh_a_lot]

Thanks guys! I am now ABLE to sing but it's not my usual... ability I guess...

im sure u are still great!

[WillsGirl]

Thanks!
I ALMOST completely have my voice back!!! Now I can reach most of my range it's just.... nasally I guess, not QUITE up to par but the try outs are THIS Saturday so PLEASE! be praying for me!!! I get so nervouse and I REALLY want to have my voice COMPLETELY back by then!!!

[Rhyanidd]

umm this past saterday or the saterday in march?!?!

[WillsGirl]

THIS Saturday! March... uh... 3rd!
And I have my voice back!!!
Thanks for praying! PLEASE pray for my nerves, I really just want to give this all I've got!!! And I can't always do that infront of people.

[Rhyanidd]

Oh I'm sure you'll do great...and Saterday is the 4th I think...yeah cuz my dads birthday was sunday so that means it was the 26th and the 28th was tuesday (hell on earth day for me) and so the first (today) is wenseday and so the 4th is saterday....

[WillsGirl]

Yeah, Thanks! It wasn't great because I was so nervous but once I started I did alright. I know I was better than a nice number of people because they were just awful LOL like on American Idol!!! LOL

[laugh_a_lot]

Yeah, Thanks! It wasn't great because I was so nervous but once I started I did alright. I know I was better than a nice number of people because they were just awful LOL like on American Idol!!! LOL

HAHA.....Im sure you were better than them if it was like on American Idol. I dont mean anything mean against American Idol I was referring to the beginning auditions. ( In case someone was going to get upset I thought I would clear that right now)

[WillsGirl]

LOL, don't sweat it, I know what you mean!

[Rhyanidd]

Gettin a bit vain now are we?:p J/K..

[WillsGirl]

ha ha ha. LOL no, I'm still not even as confident as I would like.
But when someone finds a way to sing a song in three different key almost at the same time... well it's not so pretty ya know?

[Rhyanidd]

*scrunches up eyes and plugs ears* owww!

[WillsGirl]

LOL, but I didn't get it, niether did anyone else I know... everyone is saying they chose unusual people but I got free seats out of the deal! I'm not so sure I wanted to sing in front of that many people anyway. LOL
So... I'm trying to write a duet with a friend of mine but it's not working so great.

[Rhyanidd]

yeah...what were we talking bout again?

[NarnianPrincess]

yeah...what were we talking bout again?
That's a good question! What are you talking about?!

[WillsGirl]

We were talking about the tryouts at the baseball field.... (Ring a bell?)

[~Wylla~]

I guess... I just want another place to get my feelings out.
And I wouldn't mind some feed back. I mean... I do kind of want to know if I'm on the right trach here. I LOVE to sing but I don't have a lot of expieriance writing lyrics so... I'm just going to post some things.

I wrote this song after my family went through "The Cancer Wars"


To See Your Face

Through the window I watched it rain,
Through my tears I watched your pain.
You were there in every thought,
I was scared but you were not.

Chorus:
And I will wait 'till kingdom come,
To see your face, the way it was,
Before the rain
Before the pain
To go back in time, and just play again.

I was lost,
In the darkness there,
I counted cost,
But didn't care.
I wanted you,
to be whole again.
I missed my cue,
And fell into sin.

Chorus

Through the songs
And through the nights
Oh how long,
Without light?
I saw you change, day by day
Stuck in a cage, with nothin' to say.

Chorus

We made it through one tough year,
But not without a thousand tears.
And I have yet, to see your face,
The way it was before life changed.

Chorus

Bridge:
To go back in time, and just play again,
Like the good 'ole times, my brother friend.

Now I know, we all have changed,
And life will never be the same,
But I still wait wait, to see your face,
the wat it was,
Before Cancer came


Wow! :)
I have never seen anything like that before! I love those lyrics! You really do have a gift! You should like publish them or something! :)

[WillsGirl]

Wow! :)
I have never seen anything like that before! I love those lyrics! You really do have a gift! You should like publish them or something! :)
aaawww that is one of the sweetest compliments I have ever heard! Thank you!

[Rhyanidd]

OH NOW I REMEMBER! I knew it was tryouts of some sort just couldn't remember...its your fault you didn't respond for so long!:D

[WillsGirl]

yes it is... I'm sorry... lol

[Rhyanidd]

whatever! Lol...

[WillsGirl]

okay so..... now what?

[laugh_a_lot]

hmm......Anymore lyrics to write?

[WillsGirl]

Lost in a world of eveire judgement.
Where is the love, where are the sentaments?
You know everything, or thing you do.
Really, you know nothing, and you know it too.
You have a mask, a great disguise,
giving me feelings, oh how I dispise.
you have to be in the middle of it all,
everyone is waiting to watch you fall.
Stop this pretense, I'm not the only one who sees through.
Everyone knows the REALL you.
Stop judging everyone, you don't know.
Your bring hate upon yourself JUST GO!

okay this was an on the spot thing because someone really upset me... :o :rolleyes:

[Rhyanidd]

Well if that dont put how a lot of people feel into words then I am a cow..;)

[WillsGirl]

Woah and it's like littered with typos! Sorry 'bout that!

[laugh_a_lot]

Is this person the person whose dad is on the phone with your dad? Really good though, of course! Its WG here!!!

[WillsGirl]

Is this person the person whose dad is on the phone with your dad? Really good though, of course! Its WG here!!!
yeah it was but everything got worked out... :o whew :rolleyes: :D :cool:

[Rhyanidd]

yay! I'm glad it is worked out!:cool:

[laugh_a_lot]

Me 2! Well, it says that my message is too short so I will just write that.

[WillsGirl]

LOL, well thanks guys... I have to see this girl in the morning and I must say... I'm a bit anxious.

[NarniaNews.Net]

I feal so lost

[WillsGirl]

I'm sorry.... why do you feel lost?

[NarniaNews.Net]

did I miss something?

[WillsGirl]

I feal so lost
I was wondering why you said this ^ :confused:

[NarniaNews.Net]

oh well never mind

[WillsGirl]

okay......:confused:
I'm a good listener if you decide to spill....
goodnight.

[NarniaNews.Net]

goodnight............

[laugh_a_lot]

Hmmm...goodnight...its a bit early for that as of now, but I felt left out.

[WillsGirl]

LOL, don't worry about it... I think I'll have a poem for tomorrow... I like to write on the holidays.

[Someonebeatmetowunderkind]

I guess... I just want another place to get my feelings out.
And I wouldn't mind some feed back. I mean... I do kind of want to know if I'm on the right trach here. I LOVE to sing but I don't have a lot of expieriance writing lyrics so... I'm just going to post some things.

I wrote this song after my family went through "The Cancer Wars"


To See Your Face

Through the window I watched it rain,
Through my tears I watched your pain.
You were there in every thought,
I was scared but you were not.

Chorus:
And I will wait 'till kingdom come,
To see your face, the way it was,
Before the rain
Before the pain
To go back in time, and just play again.

I was lost,
In the darkness there,
I counted cost,
But didn't care.
I wanted you,
to be whole again.
I missed my cue,
And fell into sin.

Chorus

Through the songs
And through the nights
Oh how long,
Without light?
I saw you change, day by day
Stuck in a cage, with nothin' to say.

Chorus

We made it through one tough year,
But not without a thousand tears.
And I have yet, to see your face,
The way it was before life changed.

Chorus

Bridge:
To go back in time, and just play again,
Like the good 'ole times, my brother friend.

Now I know, we all have changed,
And life will never be the same,
But I still wait wait, to see your face,
the wat it was,
Before Cancer came

That is an awesome set of lyrics. You had me all the way up to the last line. I would change the last line about cancer. I am sure it means something personal to you, but you want to connect with a wider audience. I would keep it vague enough so others can identify it with their own story.

Keep at it. I wish i could get my thoughts out that clearly and that beautifully. As it is, i will just have to stick with being a critic. ;)

[WillsGirl]

That is an awesome set of lyrics. You had me all the way up to the last line. I would change the last line about cancer. I am sure it means something personal to you, but you want to connect with a wider audience. I would keep it vague enough so others can identify it with their own story.

Keep at it. I wish i could get my thoughts out that clearly and that beautifully. As it is, i will just have to stick with being a critic. ;)
LOL, THANK YOU! I think that is Great because my mom and I were talking about these lyrics RECENTLY, and BOTH said the same thing about that last line... I just haven't gotten around to changing the post.
Thank you for the compliments.

[WillsGirl]

A work IN PROGRESS.....
(or at least part of it.)

I don''t know where we get,
the idea that life should be a free ride
but the quoted one must be an idiot,
'cause man, we know it just aint right.
Stop asking for free hand outs,
get up, go do a hard day's work,
Figure out what life's about,
then come back and show 'em what you're worth.
People come and People go,
Life and Death? What do we know?
Do we have enough compation, do we have enough Sympathy,
or are we just lookin' out for number one, and yeah, that'd be me.
I'm not sayin' you should always be so troubled,
I'm not sayin' life should always be so hard,
I just think we need to go the distance,
I just think we should aim far!

[Rhyanidd]

I heard that one...loud and clear....you do know how to grip me....

[WillsGirl]

I heard that one...loud and clear....you do know how to grip me....
YAY! I'm excited about this song! If I can get it done in time, I might record it at camp!

[unseen_dreams]

I like that one too!!
I'm telling you, it's powerful.

OH OH OH did I tell you Kate??? I finally have a song with guitar chords!! :D :D

and I think that would be a great song for you to record....

maybe we should start workign on a duet......

[Rhyanidd]

YAY! I'm excited about this song! If I can get it done in time, I might record it at camp!
Thats so awesome!

[WillsGirl]

Well thank you... there is so much going on in the song, I was working with it today and just got overwhelmed, there is so much... I mean like a lot of things talked about ya know?

[Rhyanidd]

Well I DONT really know, lol, but I get the picture!;)

[WillsGirl]

LOL, well thanks anyway reep!


What have I gotten myself into.
Struggling with what's right and what feels good.
I never thought I'd be so confused.
the line is grey now when I look.
My mind is playing games with me,
I feel a war going on inside.
Am I a slave or am I free?
Is this discision truely mine?

Chorus:
I know that I am a mess.
But now I'm lost in the darkness.
I used to be fine on my own.
But the distractions have grown and grown.




TO BE CONTINUED...

[Rhyanidd]

*in darth vader voice* Come to the dark side...lol...well I can't give you a judgement until I've read the whole song....:rolleyes:

[WillsGirl]

*in darth vader voice* Come to the dark side...lol...well I can't give you a judgement until I've read the whole song....:rolleyes:
After RE-reading that... it sounds like I'm on drugs or in a gang or somethingREALLY bad! I'm not by the way... just to clear that up... but you know... being a Pastor's kid... peole tend to be more particular and you know... stuff like that.

[Rhyanidd]

After RE-reading that... it sounds like I'm on drugs or in a gang or somethingREALLY bad! I'm not by the way... just to clear that up... but you know... being a Pastor's kid... peole tend to be more particular and you know... stuff like that.
Oh I knew that, I'm not a pastors kid but I know somewhat how you feel since my mom is the admin of a homeschool program and I get some (quite a bit acctually at least I used to till I stood my groun and fought back)flak from the other kids...

[WillsGirl]

Yeah... I HATE that!

[Rhyanidd]

Yeah... I HATE that!
I dont know what I did, but they've stopped, but I sometimes get the feeling they are talking about my family behing our backs...and it makes me grumpy alot...:(

[WillsGirl]

Yeah, I just always feel like I'm uder a microscope, whether it's enemies, just people who judge me or even my friends and family!

[Rhyanidd]

I am an elders daughter, and my family was one of the first familys in our very small church so I feel like all the adults there expect a certain behaviour out of me...that I dont have...