jen15
12-29-2005, 06:41 AM
hi guys!
i'm jen, i'm 15
and this is my first poem about narnia.
i wrote it about suzan, but it can also be about anything else not even related to narnia.
i'm sorry if there any grammer mistakes- English is not my first language.
plus, i wanted to say- for me, narnia has nothing to do with christianty. i'm a jew, and i loved all of the books, and i read them so many times, and it's simply a book about a magical land called narnia. anyway, that is my opinion.
now- the poem.
Every wish she had ever made,
Every thought that ever crossed her mind,
Every word she had ever spoken,
Every tear she had ever shed.
All for the dream.
And then she got there.
And it was exactly as she dreamed.
She ran, as far as she could run.
In the land of spring,
The smile found her.
And it was just her and the smile.
In the land of summer,
She found the laugh.
And they became three.
In the land of fall,
She found love.
And the smile and laugh were as useful as ever.
In the land of winter,
It was only her again. Alone.
A terrible obligation broke her.
The gates of the dream locked in front of her.
She could only see the smile.
She could only hear the laugh.
She could only smell the love.
She went back. Away from home.
She made herself forget about the dream
Only remembered the winter.
And when the gate finally opened
To let her in,
She wasn't there.
i'm jen, i'm 15
and this is my first poem about narnia.
i wrote it about suzan, but it can also be about anything else not even related to narnia.
i'm sorry if there any grammer mistakes- English is not my first language.
plus, i wanted to say- for me, narnia has nothing to do with christianty. i'm a jew, and i loved all of the books, and i read them so many times, and it's simply a book about a magical land called narnia. anyway, that is my opinion.
now- the poem.
Every wish she had ever made,
Every thought that ever crossed her mind,
Every word she had ever spoken,
Every tear she had ever shed.
All for the dream.
And then she got there.
And it was exactly as she dreamed.
She ran, as far as she could run.
In the land of spring,
The smile found her.
And it was just her and the smile.
In the land of summer,
She found the laugh.
And they became three.
In the land of fall,
She found love.
And the smile and laugh were as useful as ever.
In the land of winter,
It was only her again. Alone.
A terrible obligation broke her.
The gates of the dream locked in front of her.
She could only see the smile.
She could only hear the laugh.
She could only smell the love.
She went back. Away from home.
She made herself forget about the dream
Only remembered the winter.
And when the gate finally opened
To let her in,
She wasn't there.