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peterluvr4evr89
12-27-2005, 06:24 PM
hey ya'll i hav a really funny poem!
well here it is!

my loves by CoCo N.Uts

my luv is a seamonkey,
he is very cute.
he knows how to get down and funky,
but he sadly is mute!

my luv is a pig,
he wears a wig.
not much of one a toope even,
he name is steven!

my luv is a cat,
he wears a hat.
his name is dog,
he lives in a bog!

tell me wat you think!

Rhyanidd
12-28-2005, 06:22 PM
Intresting....did you make it???? It could use a few more versus....and its not what you would call shakespeare*grin*but coooool!

jillthevaliant
12-28-2005, 08:32 PM
interesting. but yeah, could use a few more verses. i love poetry though. in class last year we had to read a story about kids from the bronx who wrote poetry relating to their personal lives and after we read the book, we ourselves had to write about a problem in our lives in a poem AND story and read the poem to the class. i hated how the teacher got into our lives like that. retarded. sorry. rambling... :)

unleavened
12-29-2005, 12:02 AM
lol! nice. Way to have fun w/ the arts!

rosymole
12-29-2005, 10:22 AM
teehee, very cute! I'm just moving this to somehere it can be more appreciated!

peterluvr4evr89
01-01-2006, 12:37 PM
well yeah i did make it and it is actually even more funny if you read it in a feax shakespearean accent. at least so i am told oh and JUST WHERE xactally are you moving it to? cause it is sorta copyrighted cause it was published.

autumn_spirit_play
01-01-2006, 02:46 PM
lol... thats hilarious

peterluvr4evr89
01-01-2006, 07:13 PM
thanx!!! i am glad you liked it!

*IOWW the Iasc*
01-01-2006, 11:27 PM
thanx!!! i am glad you liked it!


lol fun poem, but I like your siggie more. ^_^

"Now what makes you think she is a witch?"
"Well she turned me into a newt!"
"A Newt?"
...
"I got better..."

xD Fantabulous movie.

Narnia4ever
01-01-2006, 11:34 PM
Random! lol :p

peterluvr4evr89
01-02-2006, 05:35 PM
lol fun poem, but I like your siggie more. ^_^

"Now what makes you think she is a witch?"
"Well she turned me into a newt!"
"A Newt?"
...
"I got better..."

xD Fantabulous movie.

well no one else had monty python so i just had to do it!

so if she wieghs the same as the duck shes a witch!
-monty python and the search for the holy grail.

*IOWW the Iasc*
01-06-2006, 03:13 PM
You english Knnnnigits! xD that movie rocks. xDD

peterluvr4evr89
01-08-2006, 06:23 PM
yeah it does ny dad works with this gut who is obsessed with monty python and his kid was crying and throughing a hissy fit his other kid yell shut your bloody mouth or i'll say nee. thats when he found he watches it a little to often. anyway wat is your fave song from it? mine is the legos singing camolot.

i have to the pram a lot!